Comments on: Finished draft for my first free eBook: 12 Things to Shorten Your Lead Time http://codemonkeyism.com/finished-draft-for-my-first-free-ebook-12-things-to-shorten-your-lead-time/ Wed, 09 May 2012 22:39:34 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: stephan http://codemonkeyism.com/finished-draft-for-my-first-free-ebook-12-things-to-shorten-your-lead-time/comment-page-1/#comment-236578 stephan Wed, 22 Jul 2009 05:15:35 +0000 http://www.codemonkeyism.com/?p=823#comment-236578 @Dan: Thanks, thought "parallized" sounded wired too, but had no solution, changed. Moved the text to the side margin too. @Dan: Thanks, thought “parallized” sounded wired too, but had no solution, changed. Moved the text to the side margin too.

]]> By: Dan P http://codemonkeyism.com/finished-draft-for-my-first-free-ebook-12-things-to-shorten-your-lead-time/comment-page-1/#comment-236565 Dan P Wed, 22 Jul 2009 03:02:46 +0000 http://www.codemonkeyism.com/?p=823#comment-236565 Thanks for the book; I intend to re-read and try implementing some of the ideas. Comments: * I like the design. * I thought the 'Low quality is one of the biggest wastes...' line on pg 7 broke the flow of the page - can it be all in the margin or have the body text flow around it on the right? * Typo, pg. 10 - 'work can be parallized' I think should read 'work can be parallelized'. Sounds like 'paralyzed' otherwise, and there are always people who can paralyze work ;) Thanks for the book; I intend to re-read and try implementing some of the ideas.

Comments:
* I like the design.
* I thought the ‘Low quality is one of the biggest wastes…’ line on pg 7 broke the flow of the page – can it be all in the margin or have the body text flow around it on the right?
* Typo, pg. 10 – ‘work can be parallized’ I think should read ‘work can be parallelized’. Sounds like ‘paralyzed’ otherwise, and there are always people who can paralyze work ;)

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